Lets start with noting that the ebook formatting in this one is really bad and at some points distracting.
Trip is too trusting and a pushover. Had me wanting to smack him over the head and yell 'open your eyes' at a few points. Silas is very impatient, and can't really understand why others aren't.
Together they are stunted when it comes to love and can't just openly communicate. In romance books it's a bit of a cliche, but it creates drama and that sells right?
Supporting characters brought the funny and the reason... and even some jealousy.
There were some scenes that flowed beautifully and dialogue that hit home, but sadly there were also dialogue that had me so confused and wondering who was saying what. Too much, he said, he whispered, she yelled is very annoying, but it can also be very needed every now and then.
Also the cringe worthy synonyms for the privates, sometimes it is ok to just use 'dick'.