I can't help but to feel that this book could have used some more work.
Some scenes were so confusing. I had a hard time following most of it. The plot was good and not overly complicated. But the lack of clear descriptive writing sadly took from that. Some scenes, especially the scenes with lots of characters, were jumbled and disjointed.
There was also a lack of connection to Kazra and Thanson, there wasn't enough emotion for me as a reader to get attached. Even though it's a short story, a few more scenes could have made a big difference.