What instead of that.
Than instead of then.
Hallow instead of hollow. (More than once.)
Strange instead of stage.
Sentences with words that had no business being there.
Sentences with missing words all together.
I truly cannot believe that this was edited or proofread at all.
I did enjoy the characters. Despite the cliche storyline and things I saw coming a mile away, I enjoyed reading it.
It's stuck on a 3 rating because I cannot forgive sloppy writing. And unedited work.