Should really just have given it 2 stars because apparently some books are just too good to go through a proper editing.
Arielle is all of a sudden Ariel.
Beginning of book he is clearly in his fathers house... ending of book he's talking like he hadn't been there since he left at 17. You would think they'd redecorated what now?
It's getting 3 because it's a good plot and good characters. It could just have used a major overhaul and more development.